Madison's Crazy Oakland Escapade

Have you ever opened your eyes after a long, sleepless night and say to yourself, "Today is a new day. Today will be better than yesterday." Have you ever been terribly wrong? If you are a lucky soul who hasn't had this type of experienced, then consider yourself blessed. You're also going to sympathize with me, want pat me on the back, then ask if you can buy me a drink. I'll totally take you up on that by the way.

Let's start with my morning:

6:00AM: I woke up, yawned, stretched myself out across the bed and thought to myself, "It's parade day! Fingers crossed I don't run into any problems!" That was my first mistake. I Should've expected the worst. At least that way my expectations would be accurate to my experience.

8:15AM: I head over to Starbucks off Benicia Road to get me a nice hot cup of coffee and a breakfast sandwich to start my day off on the right path. WRONG. These fools (for the second time since I've been there) forget about my sandwich, however, every Tom, Dick, and Jane managed to get their soy no foam lattes and reduced fat turkey bacon sandwiches with the eggs taken out. Why the hell are you going to order a damn sandwich and not even eat half of what's inside!? Another fifteen minutes pass while one of the male baristas politely tell me "Girl, don't even trip about that sandwich. It will be out soon."Sure enough, I had to re-approach the cashier by sending her evil eyes that reminded her that while she was busy heating up SOMEONE ELSES SANDWICH, mine still had not been made. Long story short, I FINALLY got my sandwich and was on my way to bart station number one.

9:00AM: My friend Portia and I made our way to Walnut Creek Bart Station. Unfortunately, to our dismay, the ENTIRE bart station was full. I take blame for this one. Coffee could've been purchased earlier and efforts could've been made to get to the station earlier. In the end, do I care? No. Do you want to know why? Because that's the way the cookie crumbles when it comes to decisions I make in my life. Does the cookie crumble for me in an unpleasant way as the day wears on? You bet your sweet ass it does. We hopped on over the the Pleasant Hill Bart Station and it all goes down hill from there.

10:15ishAM: We continued our walk as the sun burned our souls for about a mile before we made it to the end of the parade from where we planned to watch the event. As we semi-successfully weaved our way through the crowds, several men caught on to our skills. Specifically, one man made the rather unwise decision to SMACK MY ASS while hollering out, "Andale! Andale! Move that sweet ass girl!" I'm sorry random stranger, I had no idea that you thought it was acceptable for you to touch me in a way that was incredibly inappropriate. I should have known that something like this was going to happen. Next time, I'll wear Spandex, lose 50 pounds, and stop doing squats. Maybe by this time next year, my ass won't be so sweet and you will have to smack someone else's rear end. Perhaps I'll return the favor will a smack across the face so you can shut your foul mouth.

11:20ishAM-12:30PM: We settle down in the burros of another family with the hopes that people won't make the unwise decision of pushing and shoving. Once again, I let my high expectations get the best of me. Roughly 20 people pushed and shoved us, including the children (the eldest was no more than 9 years old) being kicked out of the way. You read that word correctly. KICKED.

If we fast forward a few more minutes as hostility rises among the crowd, another young man wanted to move forward in the crowd and closer to the front. A group of young men, about the same age, told him no. When the guy (let's call him Pony Tail) persisted that the group of guys move out of the way so he can get through, one of the guys (let's call him Black Shirt) took an unnecessary stand. Suddenly, Black Shirt had enough of Pony Tail's shit. As arms were swinging, I was shoved into a man with a lit cigarette who PUT IT OUT ON MY WRIST in his state of confusion and the fact that he is an idiot for smoking in a dense crowd to begin with. All of a sudden, Pony Tail was on the ground and blood was all over his face! My left wrist was covered in ash thanks to Smokie McSmokerson.

I thought to myself, "Now that was it. That was the worst part of today and it is finally over. I need a beer." Was this the end? Absofreakinlutely not.

About 30 minutes later, a teenager (maybe 16 years of age at most) proceeded to shove herself into the family we were standing near. She was obviously drunk, not to mention she proceeded to VOMIT EVERYWHERE. Then, this little asshole started yelling at the family who gave her a plastic bag to finish puking in. Apparently, she still wanted to go to the front of the crowd. She didn't think it was fair that this family wouldn't let her through! What a nut case!

Fortunately, there was a silver lining. The grandmother in the family (let's call her Abuelita because she was a tiny fire cracker who smokes A LOT of pot) jumps onto her ice chest and points to a man in front of us, all while screaming out, "Cutter! Cutter! CUTTER!!!" She must've seen the wild look in my eyes that complemented my state of confusion because she looked at me and said, "That man! You see him right there!? He is a CUTTER!!! He came walking in and shoving everyone screamin' out 'I'm blind! I'M BLIND! I need to get through!!! What a f***ing shit head." For the record, she was the most normal and kind woman I met that day. She even offered me a Now and Later.

Did you think that was the end of Madison's Crazy Oakland Escapade? Well, you're wrong. As if things couldn't get weirder, crazier, and scarier, people from behind begin spreading like it's the Red Sea and Moses is coming to free us all from our madness and confinements of the crowd. Suddenly, Moses comes walking down with a SNAKE wrapped around his body!  Now I know ya'll didn't see that coming because I sure as hell didn't.

By the time the clock struck 12:30, I was out of there. Abuelita was leaving with her family and we hustled our asses off behind her! I left Oakland with a bad tan, a cigarette burn, and a need for a drink (or some ice cream). We settled with some crepes and a trip to the movies with an attempt to forget the horrific trip to the Warriors Parade.

By the way, I'll be at the bars in Benicia accepting my free drinks :) .

Dear CVS

Dear CVS,

When I first discovered kodak kiosks in your stores years ago, I was full of excitement. Finally, I could print out all the photos my heart desires at a somewhat decent price. My cravings to have printable photos be a part of instant satisfaction had come true at last!

What is the one thing better than me clicking a button on the kiosk in your store, then waiting as they slowly but surly print out image after image of memories I had collected? Doing it all from home!

There is not much more in life that I want in a one-hour photo pick up other than, let's say a thirty-minute photo pick up, but that isn't my concern here. My concern lies in the depths of your website's deception.

Let's take a moment to look at exhibit A:

As you can see, not only is there a special logo indicating FREE SAME DAY PICK UP, but below that icon, there is a statement that says my photos will be ready in "about in hour."

Now let's look at the MOST DECEPTIVE WORD I HAVE EVER HEARD!!!

A-B-O-U-T.

When you told me my pictures would be ready in "about an hour," did you mean that the printers were located on Mars, or that you would get around to printing them when you felt like it?
Maybe the amount of electricity used to print the photos makes employees a safety hazard for lightning storms, so the "about" implies it may take longer than an hour.
Perhaps an employee's interest in taking part in a ninja fight against tiny blood-sucking ninjas that are the protectors of the kiosk stop them from getting the job done in a timely manner.

Who know's what this "about" word actually means. Only the deceptive, manipulative,  and unprofessional website developers and the president of CVS will know.

For know, let's take the time to check out exhibit B:

I should've known that the second sentence in this email was a trap and that I would never actually receive a separate email. When I received this email, I thought to myself, "How awesome is this!? I can continue running errands for 'about' an hour, and my phone will buzz me with an email from CVS when the time comes to pick up my pictures!"

WRONG.

Oh CVS, how you have betrayed me. Not only did I never receive this email, but upon arrival at the location of my pick up I learned that my order was never even processed.

Would you like to know more about why my photos were NEVER printed? Of course you do. I'm sure your number one priority revolves around satisfying customers' wants and needs. I am certain it has nothing to do with your desire to save money by skimping out on customers and LYING TO THEIR FACES. It's a good thing I am trying to see the best in your company (I say this with mild sarcasm).

I suppose I never stated why my photos were not ready for pick up when I showed up more than an hour later because I never received an email confirming that they were ready. The reason is that too many people were not coming to pick up their orders, so paper and company money was being wasted.

With that being said, I don't care. It is not my fault that other people chose not to pick up their photos. It is not my fault that YOU made it an option to either pay online or pay at the time of pickup. It is also not my fault that you made the decision to CONTINUE to give me the option for a "one-hour pick up" where my photos would be ready in "about" an hour.

In conclusion, I accept your apology in advance.

Sincerely,

Disgruntled customer who just gave you a burn.

PS: Would you like some ice for that?

Fiction Writing Final Portfolio

The following story I have written follows the lives of four people over a period time being challenged with love, abandonment, and the unfathomable death.

Karah and The Baby: The Beginning

I hate myself for what I have done. I hate that every morning, I have to wake up next to him and pretend that I am happy. It makes me sick to my stomach. Every morning I turn, look at him, and force a smile on my face. In reality, I want to run. I dream about it sometimes. There I am, watching him slowly fall asleep with his book still in his hands. Then without any hesitation, I get up and leave. I walk straight out the door and I don’t look back. Sadly, I wake up, and my dream never comes true. 

Instead, I find myself moving in agony as I face the same pain I went to sleep with. I’m not just talking about the emotional part of all of this. My entire body aches as if I were hit by a car. My feet are swollen and it takes me three thrusts and a few deep breaths just to get myself out of the bed in the morning. He always wants to help me with that part, but I can’t let him. I won’t let him.

How does he not see how miserable I am? How is he not miserable too?

I maneuver myself out of bed and his first response is always, “And how are we feeling this morning?” It always happens as he strokes my belly. It makes me sick to my stomach. My pale face always manages to force a smile, although I’m not certain I can keep this up much longer. 

My depression grows as the baby grows. Why do I have to be pregnant? Why did this thing have to grow in me? Why not someone else? How am I ever going to love it knowing what I did? And there he is, looking at me. He still looks at me the same way he did the first time he told me he loved me. Those eyes. They glisten as if I am the best thing that has ever happened to him, and this baby is the key to his ultimate form of happiness— his ecstasy. Yet here I am, saying those three words back, but not knowing what to do with myself. 

Do I tell him? No. I can’t.

His heart is so full of love for me and this child and I’m taking complete advantage of him. How does he not see it? Is he mistaking my sorrow for pregnancy hormones? I don’t get it. Maybe he does see it, but he is choosing to ignore it. Maybe he doesn't want to believe what I have done. If I keep my mouth shut, we will never have to worry about it. 

It. I still can’t believe I did it. I have so much pain from this baby, but nothing compares to the pain I’ll be feeling if I tell him the truth.

As he leaves for work, he kisses my forehead, kisses my belly, then gently kisses my lips as I hold back my complete revulsion to all of it. I lock the door as he walks out and pray he will never come back. I pray that I don’t have to be the bad guy. I close my eyes tight as the tears seep out the sides of my lids and just pray that he figures out what a horrible person I am.

I’m a mistake that he should have never made and I should have never let him make it. I knew that I was a horrible excuse for a woman, but I couldn’t help myself. I thought I could change for him. I thought I could be a better person, but I was wrong.

Why do I feel this way when he has always been so good to me? I know why and tonight I am going to tell him the truth. When he gets home, he’s going to find out that  I’m carrying a baby that isn’t his. 

Michael at The Interview

I don’t want to be here anymore.

I don’t know what to tell you. My mom was a crack-head— a junkie. She spent more time with her dealer than she did with me. And guess what? You and I both know that she’s the reason I’m in this mess in the first place. 

Why couldn’t she have just had an abortion instead of having me? At least I wouldn’t be here.

Fine. You want to know the truth? Ok… I’ll tell you what you want to hear, but only under one condition. I never want to have to talk to or see my mother or her dealer ever again. Understand?

So here it goes.

I want to say it was early December because that’s when her dealer Chris pimps her out so she can even her debt with him. He calls it a “Chris-mas Special,” but if you ask me, it’s more of a “Chris-mas Bonus” for him and “Chris-mas from Hell” for her. Does she care that this is her life? Maybe at one point she did, but definitely not anymore. Like I said, I never knew my mother when she was sober, because she never was. At  least not since she had me. I think that’s when she finally lost it.

I do blame her for what happened.This is all her fault. If I found out my girl got pregnant with another man’s kid, I would probably leave too. 

I blame her for everything.

I know what you're thinking. I need to get to the point. But I have to tell you the background. You have to know this stuff, don’t you? Probable cause or whatever so you can go arrest her and Chris? You are going to arrest him too, aren't you? You better, because he may not have pulled the trigger, but he did everything else after that. He’s even more fucked up than my mom. She at least cried when it happened, but Chris was different. Don’t get me wrong. He was pissed at my mom for killing that guy, but that’s not even the worst part. Shit, man… He came in our house eating a god damn sandwich that one of his body guards brought him.

I hope they both rot in jail.

Anyways, like I said, it was early December and my mom had just gotten back from her “Chris-mas Special” outing. She walked into our apartment, tossed her shit on the table, then shot herself up with whatever was in that syringe. 

She left me alone.

So like I said, she was doped up on drugs and lonely because I was a ten year old kid who was a reminder of what she did to ruin her life. She hated me and blamed me for who she had become. She didn’t need to say it. I could see it in her eyes, in the lack of love and affection she showed me as a kid. I was her biggest mistake.

I was a mistake.

I know. I need to get back to what happened. She stuck the syringe in her, shot up, and someone started banging on the door. I remember thinking that something was wrong, because she usually tried talking to me when she got home from work. It was always something along the lines of, “Hi baby, momma’s home. Did you eat or can I throw something in the microwave for you?” As if she really cared.

That bitch never cared about me. 

Instead, she didn’t even look at me. She just jumped right into the drugs. As the knocking got louder, my mom walked over to the door and started yelling. It was Chris and he wasn’t allowed at our apartment. That was the one rule that she gave him when they made their agreement with the “Chris-mas Special.”

She turned away from the door and told me to go hide in the closet, but I was ten. I wanted to see what was going on. Instead I went under the bed. That gave me a clear view of the kitchen where they were standing. I hid, watched, and listened.

But I should have gone in the closet. I shouldn’t have looked or listened.

That was when I heard their conversation. Chris told her that killing his best customer meant that she was going to owe him a lot more than a holiday special to make up for all the new money he would be losing. She said that Kevin had it coming.

She muttered off some excuse that Kevin wanted to get kinky with her. At first my mom said yes, but when he pulled out the knife because he likes working with blood, she panicked. She pushed him off her, grabbed her gun, and shot him. At least, that’s what she said she did.

Then she ran back to me. Whenever my mom does a Chris-mas special, Chris shows up afterwards at the guys place to collect his money. When he showed up to Kevin’s apartment and he was dead, he knew my mom was last with him.

I wish I were dead like Kevin. 

Chris came to the our apartment afterwards and told my mom she needed to help him bury the body. I couldn’t hear everything they were saying. It was mostly bits and pieces. I did hear Chris say one thing. He said, “You killed him. You're gonna help me clean up this mess or you'll end up with Kevin.” They walked out the door and I fell asleep under the bed. 

At one point in the night my mom came back and the next morning she pretended like nothing happened. 

I pretended too. 

I’ve been pretending it never happened until now.

So now here we are, fifteen years later, and you finally found the body that they buried. Kevin, right? Those bastards thought they could get away with it, and for a while I thought they were right. 

Karma came back for them with a vengeance. 

They ruined my life, so I’m glad to help you guys ruin theirs. I’ve pretended for too long. I’ve pushed it all under the rug, but now that you have the body I feel like what I say will actually make a difference.

I can finally be free.

Just don’t forget about our deal. I don’t want to see or talk to them ever again. As soon as I got the chance to get away from her, I ran as fast as I could. I managed to leave that life behind me until you guys tracked me down this morning.

I’ve told you all I know, and my words are all I can give you. 

I know this is going to go to trial. 

You’re sure this is being taped, right?

Tonight I’m going to jump.

Kevin Six Feet Under: The Confessional

Fuck my life.

How in the world did that bitch manage to kill me? It’s been 10 years and she’s still holding that grudge against me. All we were doing was having a little fun. No one needed to get hurt. And how the hell have I been getting serviced by Chris’ hookers for all these years, but I’ve never seen her until now? Shit. I’m fucking dead.

I didn’t even see her pull the gun. I don’t even know if I blame her. Can I? Should I? Can she still blame me? I know I’ve made my share of mistakes in my life, but Karah was always better off without me. 

I told her that when we hooked up the first time. I remember saying, “Karah. You know I just want to have fun. And you know you’re engaged. Are you sure you wanna do this? Because I’m not looking to get caught up in any drama. I got my own drama.”

She looked at me with that pretty little face of hers and said, “Baby, I’m all about fun. Derrick never has to know.”

She was right that Derrick never had to know, but I should have seen it. I should’ve seen that glimmer in her eyes. She had this look that said, “I’m gonna get you to love me.” I just thought if I ignored it, she would leave it all alone. Of course, I was wrong as usual.

I hated wearing condoms and she loved to please me. When you put two and two together, a whole shit storm was created. Long story short: Karah got pregnant and I left her. I was such a dick. I didn’t think she would end up as a stripper. I always thought she would keep her mouth shut about us and make that detective fiancé of hers think he was going to be a dad.

By the way, what kind of detective doesn’t even notice when his wife is going out and fucking some other guy? Did he know what she was doing or was he just blind as a bat?

I still can’t believe I’m fucking dead. I’m dead and in a ditch. All I wanted was a quickie from one of Chris’ regulars, yet he had to toss me Karah. She isn’t even a regular! That bitch was a junkie! How the hell did that happen?! Did I do that to her? Was she that in love with me? Is it even love or is she just crazy? Am I crazy too? I must be if I’m dead. 

All I know is that I’m somewhere dead and in a ditch and Karah is alive. Since when do hookers carry guns? I thought they stuck to knives, but that’s just from experience with them. 

Why the hell is she a hooker? That’s what I really want to know. I also want to know if she ever had that kid. I assume she did and that she told her fiancé too. He probably left her and that’s how she ended up this way. 

My body is stuck here, roaming the afterlife while she gets to walk around all alive and shit. She kills me and she gets to get away with it all. I bet Chris had something to do with all of this. My death is so broken up, I only remember bits and pieces of Karah. Nothing tells me if Chris was there, but I’ve known him— I knew him— long enough to know that although Karah killed me, Chris helped bury me. 

I wonder what my kid looks like. I wonder if she had a boy or a girl.

I should have never started sleeping with her in the first place. If I could do it all over again, I would have left her alone. If I knew my outcome and the outcome of Karah, I would stay away. I think she would have still found another man to treat her the way I treated her. She was lonely and completely fucked up in her mind. No one could change that. But if she didn’t end up with me, maybe she would’ve ended up with someone who would wear a fucking condom. Maybe then she wouldn’t have a child whose mother was a junkie. Maybe she would never have children. 

I don’t know much about Karah after I left her. I never knew her detective fiancé. I also never knew what she did with the baby. I do know that the decisions I made eventually led to my death. I pissed her off enough in the past for her to carry a gun and hold onto it until that same day we finally crossed paths again. I was the reason she carried the gun, because I was the only target for it. 

I don’t know if I’ll ever find out the answers I’m looking for, but I know my afterlife will serve as a reminder for everything I’ve done in the past.

Who am I talking to? 

Anyone who can hear me. 

Anyone who will listen. 

Detective Derrick and Michael: The End

It’s over.

I knew who he was the moment he walked into the interrogation room. I should have known what he had planned. I should have seen it coming. 

I should have stayed.

It was selfish of me to walk out that door— to end us that way. We could have worked through it. I could have stopped it all before it started. I remember the night she told me everything. My life became so dark after that. I only wish I knew how dark hers would become. I would have stayed and fixed everything. I would have stayed for Michael.

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She was so beautiful earlier that morning. I watched her struggle to get out of bed as she rolled and twisted her body in ways I thought only contortionists could pull off. Apparently, pregnant women can too. I always tried to help her, but she was too stubborn. She would give me this look that was a combination of sadness and anger, with a touch of regret, yet I couldn't take my eyes off of her. Her beauty was so captivating, even when she gave me that look…especially when she gave me that look. 

But I knew something was wrong. She was so sad. At first I thought it was because of the pregnancy and she thought she lost her beauty. I wanted so badly to help her— to show her how beautiful and wonderful and amazing I thought she was. That regret in her eyes made me think otherwise after some time. I decided to wait until she was ready.

I only wish I were ready for what she had planned to tell me.  

I kissed her for the last time that day. First, her forehead. Then I moved to the baby and  gave him one last kiss. I ended with her lips. They were always so plump and salty. I assumed it was from her crying herself to sleep ever since she found out she was pregnant. She always thought I was asleep, but how could I close my eyes when my other half was so lonely, so sad, so…hurt? 

I would give anything to go back to before the pregnancy. I wish I could see her smile, the way her lips curved and dimples gently touched her face. I want to see her eyes again, when they crinkled on either side from staring too long at the sun, or laughing at something to the point of a knotted stomach and complete exhaustion. I miss our past together. I miss who she used to be. 

I miss it all.

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The night she told me, my world collapsed. In that very moment, I went from having everything, to having nothing. I lost my fiancé to a man she barely knew and I lost my baby when I discovered the truth behind her misery.

She was carrying the baby of another man. 

The night she told me, my face lost color as the room began to feel cold. I no longer heard her words that came after, but instead my ears began to ring. Flashes of our past together swept through my mind as our memories together instantly felt tarnished. 

Our entire relationship became a lie. How long was she with him? Were there others? Did she ever love me? Of all these questions, only one continued to replay: Why? Why did she do this? Why did she marry me? Why did she ruin everything I thought we had?

Why?

I walked out that door and never looked back. I sent my sister for my clothes and let Karah keep everything else. She ruined me that day and I never wanted to see her again. My sister kept reminding me that I was lucky we never tied the knot…that I could have lost so much more than my heart.

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If I could go back in time and do it all again, I’d stay for Michael. I would stop the madness that I’m staring down at.

Michael’s body.

It’s limp and lifeless and blood seeps out the back of his skull. I can't believe he jumped.

In a world where I’ve lost all hope for humanity, Michael stared at me and told me what became of his mother. His eyes flickered between me and the camera and I remember him asking if I was sure the camera was on. I should have read between the lines. I should have seen that it was all a cry for help. 

That poor kid had to grow up with an absent mother, and I could have prevented that. If I stayed, he could have had a better life than the one he was given. Karah’s mistakes should not have dictated Michael’s future. I should have opened my mouth. I should have told him that I knew who he was, that I knew his mother before everything, and that I was here for him. 

I should have saved him.